Such a Long Note.

Such a long note
( for the end of The Boy Who Heard Music )

cold turkey comments
"the blog is dead
long live the blog"
the novella ends
it feels like a loss

Dear old mothers
bless them all
ouch - seems like a nasty fall

I think I have
my Method tune
it's crafted from
the Substitute - soon
perhaps the official tones
will pop out of the grid e-zones.

At school I took the clarinet
its in b flat as you might guess
the perfect sinewave it emits
but its fairly flat in its int'restingness

So should I stick with my natural voice
high bass low tenor but stretched somewhat
or pluck that old Antoria acoustic choice
it's a better pick than crashing out the watts
from my Highwatt slave and a Fender Strat.

The universal note I'd expect
is the 50 hertz hum of 100 watts
Peek in the valve head watch that blue E.L.34 plasma
mix with orange from the coil of its heater

Now just wait to download the elements
(the ones which P.T. says 'will send')
and attend the concert for the Method event.

Its such a long note for the Lifehouse in tunes
The 35 year wait could end any day soon.

Chapter 22 Reading.

Reeling chapter 22,
has left me feeling smug.
Back at 21,
I felt PT pulled the rug,
but now I am redeemed,
a little madness flipping out,
Then at the last installment
will it all reverse somehow ?

In two minds
of collective unconcious
(Jung) young stepped from the mirror
and shot out the lights as
satan applied outer coatings of darkness
(not sure why Elvis appears darkly painted)
Leila mentioned but cartoons not likewise.

Just as we watch
uncensored steps forward
polical correctness
sets up a new bridgehead

look deep in the mirror
what appears on our forehead
the audience typing war and peace
on the head of a pin,
teenage wasteland versus carnage
return
old paragraph,
begin.

Nabonidus said...
<<< Except for maybe Hitler. lol. JK. >>>

The sigh(ci)ting of Hitler
as an evil non-victor
might miss out the service
the evils provide us
We dont need to venture
the trials of the temptor
we have seen it before
and caveat emptor

The evils have trod out
such similar bad deeds
a sign post declares
the right and the wrong way
so choice might be easier
when taking direction.
They have done it so we don't.
Need further transgressions ?

Chapter 22. Never a dual moment.

Chapter 22. Never a dual moment.

In all the excitement
of Valentine's day,
it is somewhat expected
to get carried away
from the topic in hand
(ooh, should it be said)
no discussion of chapter
supposedly read.

to keep in the context
must keep off the grasp,
so one little question,
if it could be asked
for John Sullivan's Mum
"oh, please don't charge
for blogging for blogs sake
is our little task".

With twenty three sections
that is madness unbound
there's hundreds of comments
and some of it sound
which leaves me hanging
a little precipitously
about to be back
in the context "melly"

Surely if we all
just started to hum
in a cachophonous rustle
combining as one

the resulting
social implosion occurs
we cease to exist
exit stage left universe.

It could be a rough landing,
notwithstanding,
disharmonius contusions
from sonic collusions.

We're no longer there
in a structural way
like some sort of hollow
uni-dimensional holiday.

The Evolutionary Procession
has passed
its gone in the future
blinked out from the vast.

All the lights have gone out
and we are the dark.
<-- silence -->
has it now all gone silent ?
energy cannot be lost
a cultural phenomenon
compressed into a single spark

As the curtains fold in
on our adventurous day
who stands forth for a bow ?

dropped from a door (slightly, ajar )
in the mirror (albeit in some disarray)
is it the character, author or audience of the play ?

PT jumps in a limo
which swishes away
off to do gigs.
Overseas and away.

TBWHM Chapter 21

TBWHM Chapter 21

"I listened and I heard" but did I understand a word?

A spiritual dimension
with epic intention,
a dream-scape theatre of golden,
(picture) lavish, fifties odeon

an embellished jacobs ladder
rising to heaven
with rushing up
and diving off
in every direction

[ Ray, previous scene change - 79 ]

never scene a stage
with lighting rigged into the stars
as I hide from myself
in the booze from the bars

before I go on
its a solo attempt
a rainbow re-opened
an umbrella event.

There's Ruts on the stage
and rucks in the crowd
the music is muted
pogo dancing is loud

they bounce off each other
climb onto their backs
leather jacket train ticket
is this the right place ?

The sky seems to open
there's a flash back and forth
the fuses burn out
am I brought back to earth ?

[ Ray, previous scene change - 71 ]

I rush for the window,
the others drag me back
the 49th floors
no place to wig out

Guess some of them love me
as they didn't let go
do I stutter in silence
or go on with the show ?

I'm pushing the Lifeboat
right out of the house
they don't understand me
and think I am daft

How can I explain
reciprocal notes
represent rebirth
for ethereal souls

evolutionary rock
becomes the man,
one step at a time.
I think I skipped rehab
got to go back
one more time.


Anticipating the 23rd Psalm,

( "the one with all the explanations"
for those of us struggling, with Pete's quotations.
Expect its really 24, I'm sure you'll get the blog.
Being an inappropriate re-wording from the lines of Quad)

"vox box,
white jacket
with arm straps
five inches long.
I'm back in the padded room
'coz I've been leaping along

Trussed up,
for a whole night,
won't you please just explain,
this whole book and its chapters
in a summarized way.

There's angels and mermaids
a big family cast
as I Loop 'round the present
past the future and dance
ether way, I feel
that I can't win.

I'm coming down,
the Method's causing me to frown"

[over the descending solo outro]

some weeks later, I'm sure I'll fall in.

[ straight into "5:15", where the lyrics fit perfect! ]

Donnie Darko Bobby Shafto Spoiler

Donnie Darko, to the tune of Bobby Shafto,
SPOILER - Don't read it if you have not seen it !!

Donnie Darko's all at sea
hallucinations he can see
schiz-o-phren-ic as a boy can be
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

On the fridge doom is foretold
no magnets to paper hold
but its stuck there, we are shown
Where is Donnie Darko.

In the bathroom drop some pills
visitor in mirror thrills
but who can the evil kill ?
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Mum confronts him in his bed
you stop me reading he just sez
But calls out "bitch" when she has left
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Six foot bunny has a name
great big mask to hide his shame
Frank with Stein has beer to claim
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Airplane engine from on high
crush Donnie's bedroom to a pile
matchwood mid-america style
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Get a crane and F.B.I.
police officer stops passers by.
Wander back from golf course hi-gh
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

At the shrink he gets prescriptions
lays on couch hypnotic unzipping
Supposed to help but his brain is tripping
Spaced out Donnie Darko.

At the school the girls all dance
Patrick Swayze, TV trance
"you fear too much,instead of Love"
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

With magic eyes I see right through you
anti-christ right in our school halls
They march him out with lots of catcalls
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

When I stare into the future
past my eyes I see a bonfire
in your house abuse we show up
Cunningham arrest now.

Darko with air rifle, he aims
analyse Smurf's claim to f-ame
Denies Smurfette is on the g-ame
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Donnie's rifle breaks the bottle
other lads just want to squabble
you spoilt our game too many brain cells
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

The scene in school is mid-hurst high
gymnastics teacher right wing spy ?
she teaches kids Jim Cunningham's lies
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Mark the line of love and fear
or all your credit disappears
the principal is no help here
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

first an escapade with water
break the main with axe and scarper
soak the halls with hose its jolly
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Bumps into the girl he loves
saves her from the sado thug
smiles exchanged but there's no hugs
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Later on walks in the wo-od
Tries to kiss but its no go-od
must be a very special mood
Poor old Donnie Darko.

Presenting "I.M.G." to school
pictures to enhance the mood
Hawaian sunset glasses, cool
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Drive along with dad in car
brake ! old lady's gone too far
what's Sparrow searching mailbox for ?
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

study Phil-o-so-phy of time
wit-ness the worm gel flying by
is that a gun that you have found
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

projecting from the front of chest
points the path to follow next
is this the choice that is the best
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

The old ex-nun has writ a book
leather bound and ancient look
Living Retriever on the hook
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Roberta Sparrow Nun of old
wrote weird book only one sold
time secrets are within it told
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Roberta Sparrow on her knees
watches as burg-u-lars flee
Bunny catches up with me
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Invention though that might have been
it describes a fitting scene
before the run down of the Queen
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Mrs Darko's gone to see
big award show on t.v.
Sparkle Motion wins you see
Dooming Donnie Darko.

With a magnum in his head
Frank Man-ipu-la-tive Dead
I've been watching you he said
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

To prevent a blackhole forming
the prev-ious wormhole is a-calling
must get back to Airplane falling
Donnie, Donnie Darko.

Post746-Feb-1st-2006

Post 746, February the First, 2006.

There seems to be a pause
now Pete's sent some words.
The blogs got a tad stuck, caught, hitched,
around post 746,
Perhaps now is the time to chuck out some lines
that don?t include hoarse prose, tutors or whines.

Assured of a tour, (tar !)
(was that post 741 ?)
there will be a quick flood
from Who fans in droves
that blog on the run.